托福写作最不应该出现的四种开头方式

  俗话说得好,“题好文一半”,对于托福考试时的写作,一个好的开头的重要性不言而喻。大家都希望能通过一个好的开头,成功吸引考官的注意,使他对你的作文有个好的第一印象。当然,如果你的开头十分糟糕,它便能够“完美”地祸害这次托福写作考试。下面,就让阿卡索一对一外教网的托福辅导老师为各位考生总结的四种最不应该出现的四种开头方式:

  一、废话连篇 急煞读者

  失败案例:

  Topic --Should college students be allowed to get married?

  This topic is very interesting. I am very interested in talking about the topic. Because I am also a college student and I am not married……

  修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题

  In my opinion, it isn’t a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

  二、渐行渐远 离题千里

  失败案例:

  Topic---It is said that nowadays one can’t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

  I think, to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

  三、观点不明 态度暧昧

  失败案例:

  Topic--Should college students be allowed to get married?

  I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

  四、中式英语 人见人跪

  失败案例:

  Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

  In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

  Topic 2- The population problem

  The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。

  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

  I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chop when I go out buy things……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

  Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a person always does bad things, he will get “baoying”。

  上面总结的四种托福考试技巧方式就是托福写作中最经常出现的糟糕方式,让人读之无味,兴趣索然。希望大家在训练托福写作时多加注意,要避免出现这些方式。同时,阿卡索外教网提供专业的托福考试专项辅导,包括针对词汇、听力、口语、阅读和写作各部分的定制课程,由有多年托福培训经验的优秀老师进行一对一培训。

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